Writers' Critique Room

All genres welcome! A place to share your writing projects and ask for constructive criticism. Also a place to exercise your reading eye and offer your best critiques! Some creators' norms: Please state early in your submission the approximate GENRE of your piece so readers and critique-rs can easily locate a good fit. Firstly, please practice showing your appreciation for critiques with a TOKEN TIP. Amount is subject to the creator's discretion of both the effort put into the critique and the state of their token wallet. This is extremely important to stimulate the Minds economy and to show your appreciation for the time and effort somebody put into your work to give a thorough and thoughtful response. Fractions of tokens can be wired directly through the critic's profile. If you're asking for an opinion. (i) please, if you can, be specific about what feedback you're looking for. What part of the piece makes you feel least confident? The structure? Word choice? Descriptions? and (ii) please wait to post another piece of writing until another group member has posted - refraining from flooding the group helps keep a healthy rotation in the feed! If you're giving a critique, please try to be as honest and kind as possible! We're all trying our best here, though a healthy dose of discomfort does the soul well. Know you might get tipped for your thorough effort! Thanks everyone (: LET THE CRITIQUES COMMENCE!