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Writers' Critique Room

All genres welcome! A place to share your writing projects and ask for constructive criticism. Also a place to exercise your reading eye and offer your best critiques! Some creators' norms: Please state early in your submission the approximate GENRE of your piece so readers and critique-rs can easily locate a good fit. Firstly, please practice showing your appreciation for critiques with a TOKEN TIP. Amount is subject to the creator's discretion of both the effort put into the critique and the state of their token wallet. This is extremely important to stimulate the Minds economy and to show your appreciation for the time and effort somebody put into your work to give a thorough and thoughtful response. Fractions of tokens can be wired directly through the critic's profile. If you're asking for an opinion. (i) please, if you can, be specific about what feedback you're looking for. What part of the piece makes you feel least confident? The structure? Word choice? Descriptions? and (ii) please wait to post another piece of writing until another group member has posted - refraining from flooding the group helps keep a healthy rotation in the feed! If you're giving a critique, please try to be as honest and kind as possible! We're all trying our best here, though a healthy dose of discomfort does the soul well. Know you might get tipped for your thorough effort! Thanks everyone (: LET THE CRITIQUES COMMENCE!
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Giuliana Design & Illustration
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Hi everyone! I'd like to bring to the forefront an important "amendment" to the basic structure and system of this critique room. Please practice showing your appreciation for critiques with a TOKEN TIP. The amount of the tip is subject to the creators' discretion of both the...See more

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mohbestgraphicart111
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Patrick Neeman AI design leader and former instructor. Data influenced since 1995. Runs Patrick Neeman is the Vice President of User Experience and Research at Evisort, an AI-first Contract Lifecycle Management and Contract Intelligence platform and an advisor for Relevvo, an AI-based software platform that helps sales and marketing leaders. Kindly Click The Link Below To See More Article https://medium.com/@usabilitycounts

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☆ Metaphlorical Mindsphere ☆
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Dream or reality?

What is reality and what is a dream? Sometimes a dream looks like reality. Sometimes it lookes like a dream, but is in fact reality. Is there a line you cross to go from one to the other? When you sleep, you can dream. Does that mean reality is only when you are not asleep? But...See more

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Author J.L. Pattison
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“You might not write well every day, but you can always edit a bad page. You can’t edit a blank page.” - Jodi Picoult

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popoola
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Psy-Chick Elizabeth "Liz" Sarah Palmer is just your average 17 year old. She has friends, She has a job, and she can see and talk to the dead. Okay maybe she's not so normal after all. Updates once a month. Also check out my other series Jack O' Lanterns. KINDLY CLICK HERE TO KNOW MORE https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/jack-o-lanterns/list?title_no=701575 https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/psy-chick/list?title_no=711442

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Daniel Wagner
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A creative writing exercise. Good for a chuckle or two. (3 min read) https://unframeofmind.substack.com/p/dont-be-bryson

Don't Be Bryson

A Cautionary Tale on the Dangers of Virtue Signaling

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Daniel Wagner
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We've all had that friend, right? https://www.minds.com/newsfeed/1264044349793468416

Have you ever had a friend who insists on doing you huge favors that you never even asked for? Additionally, has this friend ever tried to t...

...favors that you never even asked for? Additionally, has this friend ever tried to turn around and expect things out of you; constantly holding their afore...

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thriftegaming
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https://www.minds.com/thriftegaming/blog/old-soldiers-1226191550703964160 Here's a short story I wrote today, originally intended for danielandangel's weekly writing contest, although after I realized there was a mixup over the rules, this won't be my contest entry. I'd still love to hear feedback.

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bryanroberts71
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"no it u love"

the evolution through the strife of life and love in a dream helps one see that the differentiation between one and the other, which love one another and are loved with an equal love, is engendered in their being... from life in the gardens of the dream; a realisation that our creation was also dreamed, access to (it) opens the mind to the knowledge of nature and it's laws to safeguard us... while, on reflection, evolution read backwards shows that it's... no it u love... (c) t.e.p.p. 27 january 2021

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thriftegaming
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https://www.minds.com/thriftegaming/blog/freeexpression-1212970557717635072?referrer=thriftegaming I tried my hand at this "essayist" thing. It's even (shudder) political. Don't expect me to go this deep often. #freespeech #freeexpression #art #history #culturewar

The Establishment Right's Bizarre, Masochistic Double Standards

Or how the right lost the culture war and how to fix it.

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TheDeadDoorman
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Subscribe to my whatchamacallit on Substack and win a place in my heart, there's plenty of room! https://justin2cc.substack.com/p/how-not-to-quit-your-job

How Not to Quit Your Job

Now Is the Time

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All genres welcome! A place to share your writing projects and ask for constructive criticism. Also a place to exercise your reading eye and offer your best critiques! Some creators' norms: Please state early in your submission the approximate GENRE of your piece so readers and critique-rs can easily locate a good fit. Firstly, please practice showing your appreciation for critiques with a TOKEN TIP. Amount is subject to the creator's discretion of both the effort put into the critique and the state of their token wallet. This is extremely important to stimulate the Minds economy and to show your appreciation for the time and effort somebody put into your work to give a thorough and thoughtful response. Fractions of tokens can be wired directly through the critic's profile. If you're asking for an opinion. (i) please, if you can, be specific about what feedback you're looking for. What part of the piece makes you feel least confident? The structure? Word choice? Descriptions? and (ii) please wait to post another piece of writing until another group member has posted - refraining from flooding the group helps keep a healthy rotation in the feed! If you're giving a critique, please try to be as honest and kind as possible! We're all trying our best here, though a healthy dose of discomfort does the soul well. Know you might get tipped for your thorough effort! Thanks everyone (: LET THE CRITIQUES COMMENCE!