I'm not seeing the satire in this... This just feels like a lecture... #amreading #TheIvies #AlexaDonne #WritingCommunity

6Upvotes
thumb_upthumb_downchat_bubble

More from ʀ σ ʙ σ т

I actually think this is worse than The Stars We Steal... Almost two chapters so far of exposition dumps and a bunch of random names being thrown at you... #amreading #TheIvies #AlexaDonne #writingcommunity

66 views ·

Why are Millennials obsessed with Harry Potter??? #amreading #TheIvies #AlexaDonne #writingcommunity

62 views ·

Personal preference time, but in a situation like this, I prefer to see the character actually /tell/ the joke and be offensive. This reads to me like the author either didn't want to invest, couldn't think of anything good, or chickened out because she didn't want to get canceled for saying the wrong thing, even if the character is supposed to be a bitch. This feels like it would've benefited from some BEE-style chatter like he does when his upper-enders are talking to each other and just being snotty. This makes weak characters, and especially feels awkward when other characters respond to something so specific that wasn't even said. #amreading #TheIvies #AlexaDonne #writingcommunity

76 views ·

More from ʀ σ ʙ σ т

I actually think this is worse than The Stars We Steal... Almost two chapters so far of exposition dumps and a bunch of random names being thrown at you... #amreading #TheIvies #AlexaDonne #writingcommunity

66 views ·

Why are Millennials obsessed with Harry Potter??? #amreading #TheIvies #AlexaDonne #writingcommunity

62 views ·

Personal preference time, but in a situation like this, I prefer to see the character actually /tell/ the joke and be offensive. This reads to me like the author either didn't want to invest, couldn't think of anything good, or chickened out because she didn't want to get canceled for saying the wrong thing, even if the character is supposed to be a bitch. This feels like it would've benefited from some BEE-style chatter like he does when his upper-enders are talking to each other and just being snotty. This makes weak characters, and especially feels awkward when other characters respond to something so specific that wasn't even said. #amreading #TheIvies #AlexaDonne #writingcommunity

76 views ·