Personal preference time, but in a situation like this, I prefer to see the character actually /tell/ the joke and be offensive. This reads to me like the author either didn't want to invest, couldn't think of anything good, or chickened out because she didn't want to get canceled for saying the wrong thing, even if the character is supposed to be a bitch. This feels like it would've benefited from some BEE-style chatter like he does when his upper-enders are talking to each other and just being snotty. This makes weak characters, and especially feels awkward when other characters respond to something so specific that wasn't even said. #amreading #TheIvies #AlexaDonne #writingcommunity

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