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The complete 1 star rating I gave #theUpliftProtocol if an agenda reviewer was going town on it. #writing All of these archetypes are 1 dimensional and unrealistic. Nothing is gritty enough in this book. Everything has to be shades of gray. Black vs White mentality is so passe! Are women only good enough to birth babies? What kind of sexist shit is this? Not enough diversity! Too many white people in this series. She doesn't even make it known that one officer has Egyptian roots until way later. I had to look at other reviews to find that out! What's with this fixation on Gingers?! No prominent Black Characters! Proctor Gansys is mentioned in the early chapters but never shows up again! OH OF COURSE THE ALIEN WOULD GET AN ASIAN COVER! What? Are Asians the master race to this writer!?! She cares more about traditional roles than giving her women characters agency! Unrequited Love and Queer baiting! Eliza doesn't even acknowledge Lorain's feelings! OH STOP DEFENDING THIS! Its just for the MALE GAZE! Inspired by Xena? In what way?! Eliza's not dark enough. Its all bait. Boring story of good vs evil and characters that are un-relatable. Tech inst supposed to work like that. I'm gonna go back to reading the Expanse with its "gritty" realistic take on humanity! There's no way people would use powers for good ends. ***** And there ya go. Making up 1 star reactions is fun.

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